The Pain of Loss

Feeling crushed and betrayed and hurt

Knowing no one puts me first

That's not even the worst of it all

That's not even what made me fall

You hurt me bad, you ruined my life

You're the reason for all my pain and strife

You have no idea the pain and crying

You have no idea that inside I'm dying

You say he's yours, but news flash, guess what

He's leaving you behind, you've been dumped, you've been cut

So how does it feel to lose your first love?

To have everything fall like the stars up above

Deal with the pain like I had to do

The only difference is my pain is you

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

so deep so much passion,well written....

[Jetta Zippora]

A beautiful lament, friend. :) I love the emotion and passion in your write. Excited to read more of your stuff.