Driven To Drink

First time I tried to write a poem

How to write a poem
This is new to me
Using words as pictures
Not easy to see.

Work it in your head
Think sounds, even taste
So much to consider
This could be a waste.

Why is it that in my bed
All seems to rhyme so well
Get up to write it down
The words I can not tell.

Words are so magical
They seem to just appear
Think again about it
I think I need a beer.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is great :] It is written nicely and it rhymes really well. The conclusion "I think I need a beer" made me laugh. Nicely done :]

[DONALD EISSLER]

I DONT LIKE BEER EITHER BUT YOUR WORDS CAN CHANGE MY MIND LETS GO TIP ONE !!! VERY GOOD YOU HAVE LEARNED WELL MY DEAR
TK

[WordShifter]

Thanks for the review, this is the first poem that I wrote on KK. I don't even like beer but it rhymed with appear. I like your new photo avitar.

[Barbara Lynne]

oh ginger...so lovely...so open and so real....now go have that beer!!!