Parallel Confusion

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       A door echoes the sound of dreams
                    Two worlds blend in eternal fire
                        Pure sorrows manipulate the darkness
                                Music slumbers the chaos
                              Stars luster the teachings of wisdom
                           Ashes lightly splatter the moons
                  Clouds secretly remain
               Footsteps burn the elderly dawn

                 Destiny plagues an unearthly angel

                        Impossibilities in a guided sanctuary

                           Imagination reflects reality

                                 Leaving the realm of non-existence  

Author's Note

I hope this is decent :S
It's a little confusing but that's the whole point
the world of fantasy is confusing :S

Reviews

[Max]

Well, if the point is to be confusing, then it's successful :P It's very random and all over the place, which fits with the theme of fantasy and imagination. A creative person's thoughts are often very scattered, and this is why many of us are so bad at being organized :P

[Coffee Vampier]

Its creative, and I do love the format :) I love that one could read it as all black, blue or both together.

[Kiri Nells]

I love this! The structure is perfect for the kind of message I get from it. Really great write :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is actually amazing... The best part about is the way you've confused me... I had to work hard to read in between the lines, and get the meaning of what you've written (or at least my perception of what you attempted to convey using this poem). I saw a lot of darkness, with a shimmer of hope in a few lines... Great job...

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A fascinating blend of fantasy and real life.

[FugitiveBalloons]

I like this because it is confusing to the point were the reader can make its own interpretation of it in maybe a way that it wasn't ment to be interpreted as.

[torments_scribe]

As random as it is, nearly every line is like a poem in itself. Creativity isn't something that necessarily always makes sense, but it's definitely something that begs to be expressed. If you feel you need to write it, write it!!

[Suzy Q]

It was pretty confusing. Until I read some of the lines again. It's very good, even if it is sort of confusing. Fantasy can be confusing, no one really knows where everything comes from besides the imagination.

[twylight999777]

I like it. :) Well done.

[FocusedAmnesia]

I REALLY like this. The alternating colors was nice also.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this.....it's just aamazing. Just amazing