Between ashes and stars

Between ashes and stars

A Poem by from the poet's desk
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The poem poignantly captures the gap between the potential for greatness and the harsh reality of stagnation, making it a heartfelt expression of self-doubt and loss.

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Her words come out
With a soft spoken flow
While I lay there like a emotionaless soul
I watch her grow into
A celestial being
While I become
Someone who's never seen
My heart pours out
Rivers of my broken dreams
I float in, for which
I've failed to seek
I see her soaring
Over the blue
As the pit in my
Heart overflew
Same matches
Just different burns
Same ashes
But one never rose
And that was the shame ...

© 2024 from the poet's desk


Author's Note

 from the poet's desk
Open to all thoughts and looking for ways to improve 🫶🏻

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Added on December 19, 2024
Last Updated on December 19, 2024