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A Poem by Wooddawg

Eyes water my face, looks of discontent grow

Wasting my time, killing myself slow

Take a look in my mind, let me show you around

Head in the clouds, heart sinks into the ground

 

A pretty sight, certainly I am not

An unpicked vegetable, on the vine I rot

You can hate me because I hate me too

But did I mention I do it much better than you

 

It's not that...........

It's just that...........

Constant bullshit churning in me

Question marks are all I can see

 

Blinded to reason, not sure what I am seeing

Partial reception, alien or human being

Something just ain't right, lacking something inside

From the emptiness can only temporarily hide

 

The anwsers are imprisoned under a lock with no key

Lost in between what I am and what they want from me

Put on a smile but there is always something eating me up

When I raise my glass there is always a hole in my cup

 

It's not that...........

It's just that...........

A tug of war, such turmoil in me

Question marks are all I can see

© 2011 Wooddawg


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I'm mind blown, at the moment-this is just brilliant, absolutely fantastic! This would make an excellent song; I can so hear Kurt Cobain singing this... So grungy and true-doesn't feel like so empty writing with a weak rhyming scheme... Beautiful. You actualy inspire me to write ^^ Amazing work, PLEASE keep it up-I'm sure I mentioned this before, but you're my new favourite writer on WritersCfae :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I'm mind blown, at the moment-this is just brilliant, absolutely fantastic! This would make an excellent song; I can so hear Kurt Cobain singing this... So grungy and true-doesn't feel like so empty writing with a weak rhyming scheme... Beautiful. You actualy inspire me to write ^^ Amazing work, PLEASE keep it up-I'm sure I mentioned this before, but you're my new favourite writer on WritersCfae :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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