I'm fine

So yeah, me.

"I'm fine." She typed as blood dripped down her wrists. 

She puts her arms around her friend, but not for them, for herself. 

She smiled big and bright, while inside she was crying and waiting for it to end. 

She doesn't know what she's waiting for, and she doesn't want to anymore. 

She'll do anything for somebody to make them smile, but nobody can help her. 

She doesn't want anybody to know that she's suffering, but she can't take it anymore. 

She hides in her room because she's afraid to be seen. 

And she is me, and this is who I am. 

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Wow deep this speaks truely of the mind set one who wishs to beloved but is not and hides that fact would be in. I can tell your speaking from experience. Life is well it sucks thats is that. I have thought of the same thing just not for a means to end it. Just to feel something but i a guy so i really dont bleed from the wrists. I use both my mind and body to feel anything at all but that has changed some what with finding some who can understand me and why. With out feeling sorry for me or saying i need help. So yeah this was a very deep and beautiful piece. Thank you so very much! Yours truely a mad lord

[Playing with Demons]

This is a beautiful piece. Can I just say most of the people here are tortured writers and that's what makes us all so good.
Be strong!
Cheerio!
100/100

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. And yeah, I've heard that plenty of times before.

[Playing with Demons]

I'm sure it's cliche, but sometimes people don't want to open up...or here anything else. I promise you though I do feel for you. The world is not a kind place.

[Silent Wolf]

I learned that one the hard way. ;)

[Playing with Demons]

I wish there was a book on how to prevent pain...I think that would really be great...

[Silent Wolf]

Yes. I wish. Oh how I wish.

[R. L. Hill]

This is very sad. A reality penned well.

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. The worst part is it's true. V.V

[R. L. Hill]

All the best writing comes from realities. We write what speaks to us, what we have experienced or what we hope to see down the paths of our lives. Transcribing yourself into literature is a beautiful way to not only cleanse your soul, but share with others. To connect. I have connected with you because I've experienced the same. Don't let struggles weigh you down. Instead, pen them with such a vicious air that they quiver when you lift your pen.

[Silent Wolf]

Really? Interesting. I never thought of it that way.

[R. L. Hill]

Explore the notion. You may surprise yourself.

[Silent Wolf]

Maybe I will. :3