Trip

Trip

A Chapter by Silent Wolf
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11/8/13 - 11/9/13

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"We're going on a road trip!" My parents said excitedly. 
I grabbed my blue school backpack and within moments had the entire thing full along with another purple backpack half full, both slung over my shoulder as I headed for the car. And before I knew it, we were up in the mountains. A chauffeur suddenly appeared to take our bags to a train. I handed the chauffeur my bags and the family followed him out to the train, climbing on in the caboose. I think it was the caboose. I've never been good at train parts... 
The train took off and quickly built up speed, then suddenly the car tilted. I jumped out and saw the train come off the tracks because the tracks were broken, and the last car broke off and fell off the side of the cliff into the river below. Suddenly, my family was around me. 
"Poor car." I muttered, then turned around. "Hey, look! There's the camp house!" I said, pointing to the top of a small hill. We obviously hadn't gotten far. 
"I forgot something!" I said, then grabbed my bags and ran back inside the cabin. 
I moved everything from my blue bag to my purple bag, then grabbed a few books and shoved them in the bag as well. When I came back out, we all climbed in a boat and began riding down the river to wherever we were headed. 


© 2019 Silent Wolf


Author's Note

Silent Wolf
I know, this isn't very good, but meh.

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It's weird but great lol another piece well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Wolf

11 Years Ago

Lol yeah...
Not bad, just dream like, dreams don't necessarily make sense, so just let it be as it is. I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Wolf

11 Years Ago

Alright. Thanks for reading. :)
It's not all that bad, the sentence structures are just a little cluttered. Maybe a rewrite? The s****y thing about writing, most of it is just revising. Keep up the good work, though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silent Wolf

11 Years Ago

Lol thank you. I wrote quickly because I didn't want to forget the dream. ^-^
tworeeler

11 Years Ago

I know how it feels, forgetting something before I can write it down...it sucks.
Silent Wolf

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I know. I forgot part of it. I forgot the drive up to the mountains. Lol.

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