Blossom with beauty

I started missing my grandmother, who died December 30th 2012 and this is what I came up with in 5 minutes.

Grieve for me a bit.

For this pain will go by fast. 

Blossom with beauty.

Don't weep at my grave. 

When I am no longer there. 

Blossom with beauty. 

Playing once again, 

Living the life I wanted, 

Blossom with beauty. 

Life may seem so hard.

Live your life as free as me. 

Blossom with beauty. 

Author's Note

May not be very good, but I did it in about 5 minutes.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I'm glad to see Nora on this page. She's a wonderful friend to have. : ) For the poem.... big eraser and wipe out all those huge, humungous, epically gigantic.... little periods. : ) Beautiful poem, sweet, sincere, and darling. : ) I have written a few for lost friends and family and they have taken on different forms and lengths, alike. I really like the one you chose.... I don't like repetition, and you do it perfectly!! xoxo -Mark

[мalғy]

I just recently lost my mother so it is very calming for me to read this and is truly short and sweet.
It was a true pleasure to read this!
11/10

-Taila

[KittyKatgirl]

This is really good especially for doing it in just 5 minutes. I am sorry about your grandma mine died almost 7 years ago. I love the title and great job.

[Death Girl]

I like it and I lost my grandma december 11, 2011 and I just lost my granddaddy april 7 2013

[Silent Wolf]

Oh honey, that's awful. :(

[Death Girl]

I live in my grandmas old house and when she was dying i would sit outside her old room and cry. once we took her of life support it took her a week to die. my granddaddy died less then 24 hours. It was differnt this time because i was in the room when he took his last breath my drandma i just saw her lifeless body after she died and before she died i wasn't there at the time she died and i didn't tell her that i loved her that last day before we left

[Silent Wolf]

My grandma died thinking I hated her, and wondering where she went wrong, and I couldn't even stand to look at her. I saw her once at the funeral, and I couldn't cry. I've been crying ever since. Bt recently, I've been better.

[Death Girl]

its hard i don't see how it gets better i mean there are always those little things that remind you and then again I am consumed by overwhelming grief.

[Silent Wolf]

Same. I still struggle with emotions. At night, I almost always cry myself to sleep. Because it hurts. Time never heals. When I look in the mirror, and I smile and show my teeth, I remember my grandmother's false dentures and how she only ever wore the top set of dentures, never the bottom, because the bottom didn't fit. Whenever I see my teeth or my grandma's dog's teeth, I remember her dentures, and it hurts. And I just remember her little quirks and it... It's hard to keep going.

[Wall of Words]

It's very very good. Sometimes, I think, poems are the best when you just get an idea, and go off of that. Whether it takes two seconds, or an hour, it doesn't matter. It just matters that you were really into the poem.
I think your heart was in this one. :) the Blossom with Beauty repetition also adds a very nice tint of hope and bright futures to the poem, despite the passing of the deceased.
Very well done. :)
Sylvia.

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. :)

[Michelle Kafka]

A short poem that tells a long story. I like the title and the repetition.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the title and poem...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem about death. I have similar beliefs. Good to use nature to remember the good people we had in our life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[minisla]

Nice to remember as we all must grieve

[Felicity's Eve]

I love it!!! It's an incredible tribute. 5 minutes very, very well spent. :)

'Blossom with beauty' I love how you put that at the end of each stanza. It's a wonderful saying.

Best of luck. :)