The Chaotic Heart

It thunders

It pounds throughout my entire soul

Like a hammer upon iron, the echo is deafening

My heart breaks with every crashing

Every wave of sound

I want the pain to cease

I can’t let it go, it keeps me sane

It’s all I’ve got left hold

 

So confused are the seconds clicking

One moment cold and distant like a frozen dream

Then warm, like hand made blanket

Yet no answers come

No logic

No reason

Only a twisting of emotions within

Seeming to have no meaning

Like a fiddle, played

My strings, soon to snap

 

Yet to what recourse am I left?

Walk away?

I can not

Not for anyone embroiled within this turmoil

This seeming game upon the river

I care too much

About all of them

And you

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

You're missing that one soul again...calling out for that partner match. Yearning to reconnect or let them know of your need and loneliness. Love eternal?? That is very much how it sounds. An unbreakable flow of emotion towards that one island inside... to a heart. Wrote with a sad tone of fear to never again find that island. But not an ounce of thoughts to quit the search.. You capture heartache with a grace in word expression. I hope you find your island again :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem,like the great first line.....It thunders...Lots of good lines.Well done.

[Pi Cee]

You stole my own thoughts...
Fantastic write though, of course.
=) But sad....lost love a wave that has and direction.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Wow! This is very good!

[A. L. Allen]

Wow, stunning and beautiful! I loved every word!

I don't consider myself enough of a poet to critique and give this constructive criticism, but even if I did, I'm sure I wouldn't find anything to change. :)

Amazing job!