Angel Whispers Shine

An Angel’s Whisper

Heavens door opening upon my ears

The calling ever sweet

Always strong

An endless wind filling my sails

The Way

 The Path

 The Heart Never to be Gone

 

A breeze from afar

Angelic music dancing in my soul

Whispers

Memories

Never very far away

Silent tears drip down my cheek

Holding onto heart

Holding onto hope

Holding on

One minute

An hour

Two

Feeling the immortal embrace

Wishing

Face to face

 

Oh Beloved Angel

Your star shines so bright

No matter the length of day

Or the shadows of night

You always

 Lift up my spirit

 So that I may take flight

 

Oh Beloved Pearl

Your smile is always in my eyes

No matter where I am

Whether I’m Awake

Or Dreaming

Under the open skies

Where stars, glisten our story

And our Dream still yet flies

 

Oh My Beloved Treasure

Our Link

Is never truly dry

Reviews

[Aura Inanna]

Wow, this is incredibly beautiful. I love how you start off with one sort of simple longer line and build on that with shorter lines that go more in-depth. It gives a very immersive experience.
It's a small typing error that I'm amazed I noticed (that's how small it is) but the L in Link is not italicized. Not a big problem at all, doesn't detract from the amazingness of this piece, just something I saw.
Again, great job, wonderful piece! :)
~Aura

[paparapapa]

This one's just magical. Breathtaking and captivating. You're really an amazing poet, so keep them coming. ;)

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaawwww... sooo flutterbyish... awesome write!!!