Angel Whispers Shine

An Angel’s Whisper

Heavens door opening upon my ears

The calling ever sweet

Always strong

An endless wind filling my sails

The Way

 The Path

 The Heart Never to be Gone

 

A breeze from afar

Angelic music dancing in my soul

Whispers

Memories

Never very far away

Silent tears drip down my cheek

Holding onto heart

Holding onto hope

Holding on

One minute

An hour

Two

Feeling the immortal embrace

Wishing

Face to face

 

Oh Beloved Angel

Your star shines so bright

No matter the length of day

Or the shadows of night

You always

 Lift up my spirit

 So that I may take flight

 

Oh Beloved Pearl

Your smile is always in my eyes

No matter where I am

Whether I’m Awake

Or Dreaming

Under the open skies

Where stars, glisten our story

And our Dream still yet flies

 

Oh My Beloved Treasure

Our Link

Is never truly dry

Reviews

[Aura Inanna]

Wow, this is incredibly beautiful. I love how you start off with one sort of simple longer line and build on that with shorter lines that go more in-depth. It gives a very immersive experience.
It's a small typing error that I'm amazed I noticed (that's how small it is) but the L in Link is not italicized. Not a big problem at all, doesn't detract from the amazingness of this piece, just something I saw.
Again, great job, wonderful piece! :)
~Aura

[StarryNight]

This is a beautiful poem! I love it.

[Me]

Brilliant Work

[AngMae]

Aaamazing! Read it twice and it made me smile! I love the feeling of peace embedded into your writing! This is a great poem!

[Shy Girl]

You pulled me one way and then turned me another. It almost sounded or felt as though you are speaking of somebody in the past, an important somebody that still resides in your every thought and/or action. Looking up to the heavens you find the peace you long to keep within your heart. Just a beautiful piece again. (but I may be reading this image wrong) I just love it. :)

[Hoskinsish]

I thought this was a very beautiful poem. I loved the line "angelic music dancing in my soul." Nice job.

[Raindrop]

A connection that gets thinner and thicker at some times, but it never really breaks. It has a nostalgic sense to it. Apart from the grief of a lost time, it still holds some hope which is guarded by old memories of happiness.
It's written lovely. Great write.

[Tina Kline]

This is breathtaking, very romantic on more than one level, deep emotions here. Love the imagery in this, it pulls the reader in. This is a joy to read as well.

[Lily Mae]

Very nice.. I love it..xx Easy to get lost in the ink and link :) xx

[Seshat Nidaba]

the Tao.