Lost Soul

The paths fill with incongruity

The world spins, like glass, blinding in the sun

No understanding, no reasons to explain

Confusion, a wave upon mass hysteria

The ground shatters

Shards fall

Unto rebirth beckoning

Truth revealing the flaws fine hook

All lies, every action false with fakery

A poisoned cake

Within a bakery of hope slain

 

Yet as low as the feeling

Low enough to lick the dirt

Helpless is the heart not to care

To break away from a gift

Shared once upon a dust filled moon

A movement of near impossibility

 

No restitution into apparent world view

No recourse on justice’s swift sword

Taking, destroying, dieing

Shallow has been the modern accord

 

Silence is the finality

Vestiges of some transparent delusion

Making beds with rotten meat

Failing to take out the trash

Returning to hell

Why must it crash?

 

Rational thoughts beget answers deemed righteous

Darkness breeds only darkness

Shadows shall devour all

Must end this madness

Or loose the eternal soul granted great

Reviews

[Dove]

Oh my goodness... that stanza, the last stanza is absolutely amazing and remarkable. I love this poem. Everything about it is great!

[Hoosier Belle]

Oh wow, loved the last stanza, This is remarkable. So pondering and very intriguing. I liked this write.

[Mercy]

A though provoking piece. Probably my favorite lines from this piece -
"All lies, every action false with fakery
A poisoned cake
Within a bakery of hope slain"

Loved the imagery :)

[Cassie Fraga]

you have a great way with words... I was totally pulled into the imagery...
awesome read!! You have a big fan in me!! = )

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Flawless flow with outstanding vocabulary and imagery! Each line grew in strength and meaning as I read, left me pondering many thoughts! Great Poem!

[Pi Cee]

The thoughts that are provoked reading this....by the flow however dim it glows within the outer structure you've created. A great write.

[Bridget Murphy]

Amazing, I love it especially the last stanza"Darkness breeds only darkness." and "Or loose eternal soul granted great."