Wolf to the Moon

A Wolfinism by Wolfwind

Wolf to the Moon - (A Wolfinism)

Hope is a fountain that springs from a mountain

The spirit comprises its core

It's breath is of rainbows, angels and stars

It's music we adore

Never fear of what the future may hold

The joy shall show you the way

With rhymes and love and friendship close

Let us live on and play

Reviews

[Britt Foster]

Very beautiful! Though there are a couple possible grammatical errors that I'm not sure if you noticed -- "the spirit comprises it's core" should be "its core", and then "Its music we adore" should be "It's". Just trying to be helpful since I wish people would be more helpful when reviewing my poetry! I love the flow and rhyme you have here. (:

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks for reading and catching those little typos. Grammar would be a much nicer place for me if it would just do away with possessions...lol

[Evangeline Wren Cassae]

Mind=blown
i love how it rhymes and it flows amazingly :)

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

[Evangeline Wren Cassae]

i didn't enjoy it
i LOVED it

[Belle]

And the Moon replied to the Wolf :

Amids winter snow in mid-summer
The Moon promised to still
Spread rays-- to shed light
Whilst sweet howl of White Wolf
From the forest of the Westland.

[Wolfwind]

Awe! Many thanks for a poetic response!! =) They are always the best! I'm glad you liked it Ms. Belle!

[Belle]

My quick ink is not as good as you, but glad you liked it too. Such a wonderful morning I am having today. WC is a healthy breakfast with the poets like you. :)

[Wolfwind]

Oh yes! I agree! Wolfie's are best with scrambled eggs and a side of spiced tea! ;)

[Belle]

What is it you normally put in the egg to make it scramble egg...I scramble it with eggplant and serve it with tomatoes and a little of onion. :)

[Wolfwind]

For me... it's a bit of breakfast sausage with diced white and green onions that have been briefly sauteed first. Fresh tomatoes on top would be a nice extra! =)

[Belle]

Simular to what I do. Th eonly difference is the sausage and the veggie. Hm even in food it says a lot that you are Americano and I am Filipino. Try eggplant next time, veggie is good for the body instead of protein and calories and fats from the sausage then come back to tell me how
does it feels after eating...just try Wolf ;) :)

[Wolfwind]

I shall try. I've never tasted eggplant before, so it shall be something very new. =)

[richom]

Excellent rhyming and cadence and the optimistic message is excellent. Your decision to center the lines works well here as it gives great visual appeal, Well done.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I prefer most poetry drawn to the center. The one exception might be those pieces that are designed for monologues. I appreciate your kind comment!