I like your use of repetition and the symbolism between a tapestry and our lives. I have no clue if this is where you were going with it but what I got out of it is that our lives are like a tapestry. All the events in our lives are like the rows in a tapestry, they make the picture. I'm probably way wrong though and misinterpreted this XD Either way, great poem. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review. Actually, you'd be correct with your interpretation for the most par.. read moreThank you for your kind review. Actually, you'd be correct with your interpretation for the most part. It'd wanted to blend the ideas that we are both the three aspects of fate as well as the three aspects of the trinity all in one. We the human individual is the creator as well as the created. Our lives, our journey, our tapestry. =) Thanks again, I appreciate you take the time to stop by and read my ink.
11 Years Ago
No problem. I really like this poem, it's very well written. You are an excellent poet, I enjoy read.. read moreNo problem. I really like this poem, it's very well written. You are an excellent poet, I enjoy reading your work.
I like this little piece of material. The way it sits on the page reminds me of a remnant torn from a tapestry. The use of few words/phrases adds to that aspect of several threads woven. Nice work.
I like your use of repetition and the symbolism between a tapestry and our lives. I have no clue if this is where you were going with it but what I got out of it is that our lives are like a tapestry. All the events in our lives are like the rows in a tapestry, they make the picture. I'm probably way wrong though and misinterpreted this XD Either way, great poem. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review. Actually, you'd be correct with your interpretation for the most par.. read moreThank you for your kind review. Actually, you'd be correct with your interpretation for the most part. It'd wanted to blend the ideas that we are both the three aspects of fate as well as the three aspects of the trinity all in one. We the human individual is the creator as well as the created. Our lives, our journey, our tapestry. =) Thanks again, I appreciate you take the time to stop by and read my ink.
11 Years Ago
No problem. I really like this poem, it's very well written. You are an excellent poet, I enjoy read.. read moreNo problem. I really like this poem, it's very well written. You are an excellent poet, I enjoy reading your work.
Another beautiful piece!
I love your control of language and choice of words. Particularly as tapestry is one of my favourite words (no idea why, it just sounds lovely)!
This wonderful little poem has put a smile on my face :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Jane! I'm happy that it inspired a smile. =)
If there's anything I enjoy, it is a poem. A short poem. Simple and clear, charming and pleasant..such as this. Tapestries are lovely and beautiful art forms. What a rare thing to put words to. "Tapestry prose" is brilliant, by the way. Well done, my love.