Moments Met

Scented warmth of an illustrious whisper

The brushing of a subtle chardonnay

A momentary lapse upon tasteful lips

Pausing along a path’s moonlit curves

 

Up, up over those peaceful hills that rise

Wander a pace down that southern heat

Laying down tactile joy

West to East

Always slow, ever spiriting those moments met

 

Taste from such succulent honey dew drips

Transcending those trails of sensation’s flickering

Share in that trumpeting of intonations breath

Sailing peacefully along a now common shore

 

Dream upon these lands

Embrace these oceans tides

Sacred are those silent oaths

Spoken hushed upon salty sands

Reviews

[Muse]

There is something enchanting about this. Dare I say...it was almost seductive? But honestly; how can nature as we know it be seductive?

Then again...maybe we don't give Mother Earth enough credit, perhaps she has always known how to hypnotize our senses.

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! The way I see it, we humans are just part of nature, thus the allure of natures fine points is really no different than we pink fleshy life forms. ;p

[TL Boehm]

Dream upon these lands
Embrace these oceans tides
Sacred are those silent oaths
Spoken hushed upon salty sands

This is lush - calming and beautiful poetry.

[Wolfwind]

Oooh! Lush! I like that! Thank you! =)

[Robert L.]

This poem has a gorgeous selection of soft words. It displays a strong command of sound. The sounds and your poem's theme meld and flow like a gentle river. Great work.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! =)

[Star Wolf]

A truly amazing and wonderful poem!

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! =)

[Lily Mae]

I smiled as I read this.. I miss you and your words.. Your dreams, your reality. You have a magic about you. You lay down tactile joy..from East to West..xo

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks Lilykins! You have the number ya know. =)

[DogDrawler]

Great poem! Your best work yet! I really love you like a brother, Aaron. :)

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! =) I appreciate ya stopping by!

[DogDrawler]

Hmm... By the way, you haven't reviewed me in a while. Would you mind stopping by my writing? :)