Shouted Whispers, A rivers tide

Shouted whispers

A cascade of motion in sandy grains

A something of chaos, but good

A unity of words, ink and touch

Then

Back there

Where once were

Smiles, laughter and understanding

Memories on the tides of light deposits

On the banks of that rare liquidity

There

Back then

When stars shined brighter

The rises and sets

Sweeter than strawberry wine

Time

When every minute

All the hours

And the tolling of each moment

Were measured with passing of feet

Bare upon that golden land

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Beautiful and a bit melancholy. I have always enjoyed the way you blend nature into your work. Sun, surf...the outer landscape indicative of the inner landscape. It makes for such gentle - soulful poetry. Nicely done.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I agree twas a bit of both sweet and sorrow in these words. Very much a part of me and my past was woven within it's ink.

[Star Wolf]

This is an amazing poem. So well written. Your talent shines here!

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! I appreciate you stopping by and reading. =)

[carol burgess romance]

enjoyed this....such a delightful and easy read

[Emerald Seas]

Sweet words that flow of beautiful imagery, Aaron. A calming cadence that settles the soul. Thoroughly enjoyed this read.

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks! =)

[DogDrawler]

Lovely. Pawsome detail that just lets the light back. You sound like a very mature writer.