Endless Breath

Upon ripples of the wind

Whisperings of the ocean’s voice dance

Thoughts chime with dreams

Vision paints reality

Onward

Outward

High into the setting sun

We drift eternally

 

Take us upon our journey

Sweet wings of imagination

Into the color, within the scent

The emotions of the moment embracing

Deeper

Longer

Timelessly woven, this dream

A never ceasing breath

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Inhale...Exhale... My breath barely registered as I read this piece. I saw myself under that magnificent tree...my body cradled within his embrace...my back lay curled against his chest...my head tucked under his chin...one hand around his back the other lay quiet upon his bended leg...his soft whispers of love merely a murmmer to my ear...as one hand lay restful across my hip...his other gently stroking my hair...both watching the sunset across that glorious horizon...each of us knowing that soon we will explore all that love and life awaiting us...if we decide to stand linking our hands. (Yes that's what I picture as she sits breathing in her dreams atop that shadowed water...pondering as she draws breath) :)

[Wolfwind]

I'm happy it grants such a vivid and beautiful image for you. =) I appreciate your kind words and the joyous feelings they bring to life.

[Shy Girl]

You are most welcome. This isn't the first time I've read this piece. My minds picture was hazy the first few times I read it...but I finally caught the image your words formed. That picture is beautiful too :)

[PurpleQuartz]

Beautiful...just beautiful...

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it! =)

[The Analog Kid]

This is woven very smoothly. Very dreamy. I dig the economy of language that you used.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! =)

[The Analog Kid]

Anytime brother!

[Robert Centner]

Reminds me of my childhood, spending days in the Imaginary world we created for our selves. It was so real then, like walking through a picture within our own head.

Robert,

[Wolfwind]

Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. =)

[Just me]

This is very sweet, has an airy almost ethereal feel. The picture suits it very well. I really like your style of writing.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! Not everything is the same style, I'm always trying to try new ways of presenting my ink. =)

[Just me]

I will have to read some more to get a feel of some different styles then :)

[Annabelle Lee]

Mystical, magical, bravo

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! =)

[Amanda Granger]

The form and imagery in this poem are just phenomenal and send my mind on a journey that follows the flow of this poem. I love the "onward/outward" "deeper/longer" towards the end of each stanza and the feel that life is a dream that "paints" our vision of reality and imagination. This deeply impacted me. Beautiful writing.

[Wolfwind]

Many Thanks for your kind words and impression of the ink! =D

[plainme]

beautifully written, flowing so naturally from word to word

[Wolfwind]

Thank you for your kind words! =)

[quinfinn]

very cleverly connected words and a general sense of ethereal beauty throughout, this is a positive and beautiful write....

[Wolfwind]

Thank you muchly for your comment! =) I appreciate it it!

[quinfinn]

very, very nice write!

[Lily Mae]

I have experienced this breath..and yes...still do..xo

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I envy that you have a shore so close to let your feet make that mind water connection!