The lost spirit...so sad a piece. Lost to the world it would seem. But me thinks hope can be found in the least likely for this little one. The smile on her kitty's face... she holds tight to the connection. Make it through another day you will... and one more...you know that. Even though it seems so sad a piece, I like the essense of it....darkness with that little bit of glow from the stars as a guide. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for your view on this little concoction. =)
this is a timeless human feeling. you have captured it nicely and i actually read it about six times, as it flows trippingly from the tongue and sounds so nice read aloud. very good poem!
The lost spirit...so sad a piece. Lost to the world it would seem. But me thinks hope can be found in the least likely for this little one. The smile on her kitty's face... she holds tight to the connection. Make it through another day you will... and one more...you know that. Even though it seems so sad a piece, I like the essense of it....darkness with that little bit of glow from the stars as a guide. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your view on this little concoction. =)