Voyagers PrayerA Poem by Wolfwind
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I like prayers in the old style. I also like how important the moon is in this poem. While the speaker wishes them good luck, the moon sings to make sure their voyage is calm. The moon controls the tides and will bring them safety. This kind of connection to the earth shows that this prayer draws upon the energy of the universe that dwells within all things. I liked this quite a bit.
Posted 11 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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I like prayers in the old style. I also like how important the moon is in this poem. While the speaker wishes them good luck, the moon sings to make sure their voyage is calm. The moon controls the tides and will bring them safety. This kind of connection to the earth shows that this prayer draws upon the energy of the universe that dwells within all things. I liked this quite a bit.
Posted 11 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
This one should be read before each submarine (or ship of course) takes to the sea for a 6 month or longer voyage. I have a mind to mention that...they should all carry as many blessings as one can pack within the ships haul for protection against Mother Nature, wayward vessels, human error (as my loved one is well aquainted with) or the occasional breakdown in mechanics. (not every piece is lifetime warrantied) That image is stunning...especially as just her fingertip is reaching out to just softly grace that mighty vessel...that's all it takes from one Angel. (a small protection given in the gentlest of ways) Stunning image... :)
Posted 12 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
I can picture this being said on the ship before it sails.. an incantation in a sense of protection and prayer... I love the blessings coming full circle..xo
Posted 12 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Last Updated on September 24, 2012
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Added on September 24, 2012Last Updated on September 24, 2012
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Wolfwind
Coupeville, WA
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Sometimes poet, always an artist, creator of colorful visions, dreamer, and a seeker of things not yet known. more..Writing
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