Otherworldly

A piece inspired by my creativity.

A different place

An unknown vista to behold

To step upon it's virgin surface

Some times hot, some times cold

A stranger in a strange land are we

The ply upon the stars, to go where we wish to be

Someplace... maybe this place

Any place new, never backtracking

Upon the celestial heavens we drift.

That is...

Until we get caught

In some trans-galactic shift

Oops!

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

WOOOOOOAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! THIS IS LIKE THE SHINIEST POEM EVERRR!!! (Probably on account of the shiny picture at the top) IT'S SO AMAZINGFUL!!! LIKE... AMAZINGFUL!!! I like the part... the part where... where it's like... THE WHOLE THING!!! IT REMINDS ME OF SPACE AND THE DISTANT STARS AND WHAT THE HECK IS THE UNIVERSE EXPANDING INTO AND NOW MY HEAD HURTS BECAUSE THE NOTHING IS INFIITE BUT WHERE IS THE NOTHING??? AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Nice poem...

[Lily Mae]

I am a stranger in a strange land and sometimes and oops.. ;) I just don't have words to describe how much I'm loving your work... :) This little one is smiling..xo