You make me want to live among another world. This was absolutely wonderful, just the way you allow the reader to dip their toes in this chain of events that progresses without us is just breathtaking. You described the spirit wolf beautifully from its origin to its attributes "the truest of all alphas".
"Time is merely another pathway for him to traverse"
That's just great really, no other way to say it, one of the best lines I've ever read.
Such a true poem, really hit me deep. Brilliant job
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you! I appreciate your wonderful comment! =)
Yes ...you have a deep somewhat mystical fascination of the wolf . And it shows in most of your theme and thoughts . I wish I had read all of your piece before I've watch the movie " Dances with Wolves " and " Twilight Saga "
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks! It's not a mystical fascination. It's a spiritual reality. Dances with Wolves was a wonderfu.. read moreThanks! It's not a mystical fascination. It's a spiritual reality. Dances with Wolves was a wonderfully crafted movie. Twilight is a bastardization of the wolf in my opinion and I consider that movie on the same level as sin and something less than mud. ;)
11 Years Ago
Indians still and always have high regards of wolves, even to this day and generation.
Something, I don't know what, but sooomething tells me... you like wolves...
I like your picture and your poem and the picture is really pretty and the poem is amazing and I like this spirit wolf fellow he sounds really awesome and stuff and I like how you wrote this because it makes it feel all shiny and otherworldly and I love the imagery and it makes the poem feel like it goes back centuries and centuries and more and more centuries and I can't believe I haven't used punctuation yet but anyway your poem is so amazing and I love it because it's so so so so so awesome so good job!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks! :D I enjoyed your run on sentence! It was a masterpiece! ;p
12 Years Ago
You're welcome! AND THANK YOU!!! I love those except most people can't understand them and they say .. read moreYou're welcome! AND THANK YOU!!! I love those except most people can't understand them and they say never do that again... :D Oh well.
Very nice how your well penned feelings describe the wonderful pack/flock perfectly , like a true family, love, pride, and protection. Have enjoyed your wise words, wolves are so inspiring, when you ever had the chance to face them... litteraly. Amazing words, and lines.
I just adore wolves and you captured the beauty and essence of life in just a few stanzas, I love it, I hope you'll read more, I'll definitely read more ^_^
Oh yes Aaron.. I'm so love this.. You nailed the spirit, earth and universal connection to the essence of the wolf.. and my friend..xo :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks! I'm glad I did an okay job of at with an off the cuff piece! :D
12 Years Ago
Seriously Aaron you know me better then most and these last few writes have wowed me.. I think just .. read moreSeriously Aaron you know me better then most and these last few writes have wowed me.. I think just the connection of earth, spirit and universe :) x
I guess I must just be a natural with that spirit energy. ;p Thank you!
12 Years Ago
Your not telling me anything I didn't already now.. it was in my spidey third eye the whole time lol.. read moreYour not telling me anything I didn't already now.. it was in my spidey third eye the whole time lol.. x
You make me want to live among another world. This was absolutely wonderful, just the way you allow the reader to dip their toes in this chain of events that progresses without us is just breathtaking. You described the spirit wolf beautifully from its origin to its attributes "the truest of all alphas".
"Time is merely another pathway for him to traverse"
That's just great really, no other way to say it, one of the best lines I've ever read.
Such a true poem, really hit me deep. Brilliant job
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you! I appreciate your wonderful comment! =)