To know an Angel

So sweet this thought, this decree

You my dear mean much to me.

 

You fill my thoughts with a pulsating hum

Making life beat alive with a joyous thrum.

 

The wind carries golden happiness

Upon the horizon I do feel its flow.

 

Making me wish I could take and embrace thee

Whenever you’re sad, lonely or low.

 

You are a gift through all time

An Angel and a spark divine

Who’s touch upon this traveler’s life

Banishes all evils and any strife.

 

Even though I have yet to gaze

Upon your beautiful ocean eyes, I know

That it was fate who bade me turn

T’was you it did reveal and show.

 

Since that moment, a midnight bright

You’ve become so much, you are my light

I hope you believe

I hope you know

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Sigh =) That's what this one did for my beating heart. I like the flow that it has. It's like an instruction to one..but has a smile throughout each thought from beginning to ending. Like trying to instill faith...the person you know is inside them..they just need faith to see what it is you do...you see...you feel...you hear all that they are...they just have to breathe in these beautiful words and believe...have faith .. Only one such as yourself could have us all feeling like the angel you described... Brilliant ;)

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! It makes me feel good knowing I'm succeeding in how my ink is being digested! =)

[Star Shaped Heart]

Beatifuls

[Pax]

Sweet and lovely. A special dedication for the angel in your life. Great!

[Admiral Kirk]

Ooh who's this about?! Lol... It's really great and amazingly poetic... FANTABULOUS. I like how it flows, like... something that flows... smoothly... like a buttered finger inside a tube... Yeah... Your poem is like a buttered finger in a tube... Anyways, AWESOMENESS! This poem is so beautiful it's like a sparkly rainbow ocean of buttered fingers in tubes!!!

Now, totally off the topic, I noticed the word strife in your poem! I was like, YEAH! I KNOW THAT WORD! Now even offer the topic, Cockney rhyming slang for 'wife' is 'trouble and strife'. Isn't that odd? Yeah, got off the topic there a bit... lol great poem. :)

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! :D Can't get better than a buttered finger in a tube! lol

[Admiral Kirk]

You're welcome! :D lol

[Writingfox]

This was really quite good, I'm impressed. It's sweet and thoughtful but not too much or sappy. Good job my friend

[Wolfwind]

Thanks for stopping by to read. Hope all is well out your way. =)

[Writingfox]

You are most welcome, thanks:)

[Pi Cee]

Believe in Angel dreams and the sweetest whispers from a dear Wolf's hidden lips...
I'm glad fate can be so beautiful...through your eyes.

[Wolfwind]

Fate is good for those who will walk across those dream bridges into reality. Thank you! ;)

[Pi Cee]

I love this, and you know if given the chance, right now, I run to you over those dream bridges.... =)

[Wolfwind]

*Drops a lucky coin in your hand.* ;)

[Pi Cee]

I've read this probably twenty times. And...it's just amazing. Loving.
=)

[Wolfwind]

Good! I'm glad! =)

[Pi Cee]

I read this again.

[Wolfwind]

=) ^_^ Awesome!

[Pi Cee]

And again I read this, and again and again. And my love I just keep coming back to all your words. I would just like to let you know they always leave me with the same feeling as if I heard them for the first time right then, all over again.