View from a Door

Take note and heed to winds that blow

No matter the storms

One must know

That the sun is always shining

In a bond that is shared

Love ever twining

Through what in life, has been fared

 

It’s spoken true and that’s understood

Perhaps names carved in a tree

In some life’s forest, and upon ancient wood

Etched, timeless

Caressed and remembered

Down upon the world of the living of today

It is this, that is meant to say

 

No matter the place

Or the time of day shine

Under moon that glows

It’s something divine

Storms may rage upon all any shore

But connections have woven deep

A tapestry of the core

Ever more

Ever more

A world of hope

Of joyous days

Never knowing, yes

Yet, knowing okay’s

 

A door, awaits

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

This is a very very powerful poem... In the first stanza, it appears that you are saying, "There will always be problems, and you need to be aware of that, but in a friendship, or romance, there will always be good times to enjoy in between the bad ones." This really speaks to me... I'm not sure why, but it does.

The second stanza appears to be speaking of the impression that a good relationship will leave on you, "etched, timeless" makes me think that one will never forget these people this poem refers to, because of all the great memories...

The third stanza seems to sum up the first two, sticking both themes in a bowl together and mixing them up. Then the very last stanza, "a door, awaits" seems to be sticking those mixed ideas in an oven and pulling them out a crispy golden-brown pie... One and delicious.

Something like that. Great poem!

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! That's an excellent view of the ink! The concept of the pie as two people united as one and being a delicious thing is a fantastic way to see it!

[Admiral Kirk]

You're quite welcome! And thanks, I also like to think of society as pie... Though an uncooked one... I have quite the lengthy explanation for that, too. :D

[Wolfwind]

Ooo... You should write of your society as pie explanation! I'd love to hear it!

[Admiral Kirk]

Alright, I'll send it in a mail... It is quite lengthy...

[Wolfwind]

Awesome!

[Shy Girl]

Knowing what I know... *blink blink*

Shiny do those eyes become
when they lay upon their fated one
Never far from thought or deed
the souls embrace with glowing need
Finding a light with its beams so bright
knowing the heat be worth the fight
Little did we know how one simple yes begins
the adventure of a lifetime
filled with smiles, hugs and grins

You are a gift to be treasured Sir Wolf. :)

[Wolfwind]

Oh Wow! Thank you so much Lady Shy! You have given my ink a wonderful poetic praise! I can assure you that I am glowing! =)

[Shy Girl]

"Nothing I say can compare to the gift that you are"... :)
Says Shyria to Croft as they gaze over their bluff, while an ocean calls to both :)

[Wolfwind]

Oh pshtt! You just sailed up and caught the same trade wind with your review! =)