Hurtful Words

A song I wrote

As I look deep in your eyes

Try to sort out the truth and lies

And I can’t stand this pain

Your sad lonely words drive me insane

 

I lay here on the bedroom floor cryin’

And I can’t take all your lyin’

Hold  myself together I’m tryin’

Can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

Anger and heartbreak is written on your face

I’m chained inside with no escape

These angry feelings won’t erase

This won’t go away

Oh can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

 

Tears fill my eyes when you blame your problems on me

I’m hurtin’ inside oh can’t you see

I fall on my knees, throw my hands in the air.

Oh don’t you know oh don’t you care.

 

I lay here on the bedroom floor cryin’

And I can’t take all your lyin’

Hold  myself together I’m tryin’

Can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

Anger and heartbreak is written on your face

I’m chained inside with no escape

These angry feelings won’t erase

This won’t go away

Oh can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

 

I’m through I won’t let you bring me down

I’ll leave you here without a sound.

No you can’t have my soul

I’ll pull myself out of this hole

 

I lay here on the bedroom floor cryin’

And I can’t take all your lyin’

Hold  myself together I’m tryin’

Can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

Anger and heartbreak is written on your face

I’m chained inside with no escape

These angry feelings won’t erase

This won’t go away

Oh can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

Oh can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me

Oh can’t you see your words are hurtin’ me.

 

 

 

Reviews

[emz]

very good... you portray the hurt and anger very well, i enjoyed reading it.

cheers x

[speakingcolors]

Nice work. I write songs, as well. I write the best when I'm feeling down, whether it be I'm sad, angry, or both. It's hard when it seems that people don't understand or know that they're hurting you.

[lilly wildfire]

yar, danners. mad skill
it's a real nice song.
deep.

lawl, i sound like a freak


just wondering, is it about someone?