The wish

Another old one.

Here I am in the car.
Waiting until I can see a star.
On that star I make a wish,
a wish to be as free as a fish.
Swimming around without a care,
or running around free as a hare.
Walking in a forest full of trees,
no matter what i do nobody sees.
Nobody is there to hold me back.
Anger and sadness being what I lack,
the weight of the world is off my back,
but here I am without any slack.
The wish i make every night,
never comes true but i wish it might.

Reviews

[The Dudeman (Kenneth T)]

I really like the rhyming in this one, not forced at all.