Chapter 1

Still work in progress

"Ten Hut!" the drill Sargent yelled, as we all stood in attention. waiting. it's our third month in the training camp and we're going to be shipped to the Martian frontier with the rest of the United Republic of Countries, consisting of mars and what's left of the hospitable parts of Earth. there was six of them left standing there. the new recruits.

"Private Dawes! Private Fisher! Private Stryker! Private Haddock! Private King! and Private Laura! You have been tasked  

Author's Note

still working on it

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Ok, so from what I can gather. I beleive that these cadets are all going to the martian fontier, with the United Republic of Countries. So heres the thing - what are they going to do there and whats happened to the world. I guess we'll find out as you say 'still working on it'

I look forward for the mystery to be unveiled.

Mark.

[FireHawke57]

basically the world got screwed over by a nuclear crisis. think of cherynobl but in an underwater super reactor code named atlantis. people start dieing and they all move on. people move to mars and terraform it living there until earth is semi hospitable. people move back. mars is habited earth became a colony plannet. this entire book takes place on mars. second they leave for earth. and some other bs happens

[matrixmark]

Sounds VERY intriguing indeed. I do hope I get to read more of this. That's quite an imagination you have there - Kudos to you.

Mark.

[FireHawke57]

eh I just can't find the time to post the rest

[Warrior]

its very capturing i cant wait to read more but i dont quite understand it.

[FireHawke57]

most people don't mostly because this isn't that far in....

[Warrior]

thats what i thought cause its only chapter 2 XD

[FireHawke57]

prologue is before chapter 1

[Tbear]

Sooooooo many possibilities! What are your characters thinking? What are their goals? Goodness this story can go every which way..well done..keep writing..

[FireHawke57]

uhhhh. ok. I really haven't started the story yet so.. thanks?