Downs

Downs

A Poem by Wolfe Greytome
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a football piece

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Every now and then,
You get the first and ten.

When they show on ESPN,
the highlight of this game,
Will we see your first and ten?

In every gambling den,
They wait with bated breath,
For the first and ten.

A peaceful moment of zen,
Before the chaos of the play,
Did you get the first and ten?

The chains are out and then...
The crowd erupts euphoric,
You got the first and ten.

Every now and then,
You have to try for the first and ten.

© 2010 Wolfe Greytome


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Interesting imagery

Posted 14 Years Ago


Indeed-- really like the interwoven imagery here and the fastpaced quality of this write and the message is.... well, you got the first and ten!

Makosica

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice write

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is cute i like the part about ESPN. Short and creative. You have a wonderful rhyme scheme here and a flow. Overall I enjoyed your write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful I like this alot.
Very creative and enjoyable to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Wolfe Greytome
Wolfe Greytome

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