Insomnia

just a quick little piece done specifically for a contest...

I wish I could sleep,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

Hit the gym,
work on my truck,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

Tossing...turning...tossing again,
Counting sheep or stars or even ducks,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

Still lying here wide awake,
In a bed most deluxe,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

Before you know it,
You hear the rooster cluck,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

I wish I could sleep,
OMG! Insomnia sucks.

Reviews

[MarissaVicious]

This was simply extraordinarily sweet. . and true =D!

love it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

YOU SAID IT INSOMIA SUCKS! BEEN THERE AND HOPE IT NEVER EVER HAPPENS AGAIN! GREAT POEM!

[Alicia Schroeder]

insomnia does suck! greatly put into words, awesome

[emmajoy]

laughing cos my sleeping pattern is shot to pieces at the moment but have a cure .. lie down in front of tv. .. works like a dream - no pun intended

like the flow of this .. smile-worthy too ..

[quill of shadows]

i must tell u iv done my fair shere of sleeping pills and not one of them got s**t on benadrill i took one yesterday and i was out like a skin head at a gay bar

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I guess i never had to deal with Insomnia. But your write is cute. Like the flow as well. Very creative write.

[Livenrite]

Very cute! Thanks for sharing:)

[deeps]

Yes it does! I hate insomina.
This is cute and well written.