So Life Goes

You said a lack of trust,
Wasn't worth the fight,
Passions turned to dust,
You know your choice was right.

You struggle through each day,
Stress searches and you're found,
So, make some time to play,
And have another round.

You seek a fresh new start,
Take your fate in hand,
You mend your battered heart,
As Time flows like shifting sand.

You have to be quite tough,
For your amazing little girl,
So, when Life plays rough,
Give my shoulder a whirl.

Reviews

[just is]

This is ever so sweet and wonderful. I could feel the inspiration in this.

[Senseless whatever]

excellent combination of sadness and hope, never giving up. Inspiration for all.

[Star Wolf]

Trying to start over after ending a painful relationship. To trust again or not to trust and having someone depending on you. You gotta be tough. Great job.

[Manda]

aww this was so sweet and sad, i could feel a sense of pain... This was very good. i enjoy reading your work =) keep it up

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a blend of pain (passions turned to dust) and hope (you seek a fresh new start) that infuses your poetry with such a life and history. Beautifully done!

[deeps]

I like this i thought it was wonderful and so beuatiful.
Wonderful flow as well. Very well written write.