Mine

“Mine”
By Vincent J. Ganelli

With your half grin so fine,
How I wish you were mine.

Like flowering lupine,
You are lovely to behold.
I wish you were mine.

With the twinkling shine,
Of your eyes so bright,
I wish you were mine.

Like the finest wine,
You get better every day.
I wish you were mine.

Together I'd combine,
My heart and yours.
I wish you were mine.

Two Destinies intertwine,
Will you ever be mine?

 

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this ....... i can relate

[MNeilsen]

What a lovely way to pen a wish.

[LeLe]

Wishes sometimes do come true. Well Written.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Suppose that someone you wish is yours becomes yours.. and it is lovely..I got lucky..well written.. well wished

[Lizanne]

A smile like a cresent moon and a sweet pea in bloom...a star twinkling high and a wine that is dry...two hearts now beat as one and two paths to the future become one set of footprints as you carry me off into the setting sun. A thought provoking poetic work, with lots of romantic meaning, in very short form.

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful romantic piece. Very sweetly written the rhyme and flow were excellent. Great piece.