It is not a poem; nor is it a haiku. Perhaps it is an abstract thought. Kind of like an abstract painting, but painted with words. That way it does not have to make sense to exist. Lol. Wolf
An interesting write for me, for various reasons.... I am guessing this one might be based on what you have stated in your About me page ^^ And for me this speaks in volumes. I like the brevity. And honestly doesn't have to make sense every time one writes (to everybody that is. after all that would be quite the write if one could achieve that ^^ ) Thank you for sharing ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Ty... The funny thing is.. I just wanted to write something short to prove I could... Lol. the other.. read moreTy... The funny thing is.. I just wanted to write something short to prove I could... Lol. the other funny thing... It just popped in my brain and kept me awake... Finally I wrote and posted it and then I went to sleep... hee hee Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',
8 Years Ago
Haha well I guess the latter part is something I understand quite well ^^ In recent times I have bee.. read moreHaha well I guess the latter part is something I understand quite well ^^ In recent times I have been in that situation as well. Thank you for sharing the story behind your write ^^ I enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed the write itself ^^
Laughing...ya, why did they call it critic? I'm with you, make a new dictionary and add critiquer :)
Make it the title of a new write, you have a poetic license to do so. And, by the way...nice to meet you. Welcome to WC :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you... I wrote it just for fun and am amazed at the responses I have received on it... Just go.. read morethank you... I wrote it just for fun and am amazed at the responses I have received on it... Just goes to show though... It is not the quantity... but the quality. Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',
yes, it should be a word...and on some sites if we are not a "critiquer" but someone who simply responds as to how poems affect us, how we relate...we are considered useless to the site....
as on penwrights...i am not surprised the site folded...there was a clique there which was hard to break into...and there were people like two idiots who seemed like four idiots....:)
i like the insight of your short piece, very much....and i think you will like it here at WC...it's a home...
An interesting write for me, for various reasons.... I am guessing this one might be based on what you have stated in your About me page ^^ And for me this speaks in volumes. I like the brevity. And honestly doesn't have to make sense every time one writes (to everybody that is. after all that would be quite the write if one could achieve that ^^ ) Thank you for sharing ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Ty... The funny thing is.. I just wanted to write something short to prove I could... Lol. the other.. read moreTy... The funny thing is.. I just wanted to write something short to prove I could... Lol. the other funny thing... It just popped in my brain and kept me awake... Finally I wrote and posted it and then I went to sleep... hee hee Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',
8 Years Ago
Haha well I guess the latter part is something I understand quite well ^^ In recent times I have bee.. read moreHaha well I guess the latter part is something I understand quite well ^^ In recent times I have been in that situation as well. Thank you for sharing the story behind your write ^^ I enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed the write itself ^^
I think critiquer is a wonderful word and should be added to the vocabulary instantly; after all, Shakespeare invented the best part of 2,000 words, so one more won't go amiss. :))
Beccy.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
My Hero... and Dr Suess added like a dozen words I heard.
That's a good point, I guess the best answer I can give is that yes we al publish and do our own thing.
But I think people have a natural hunger to help others.
And to make ourselves and them usually benefitted in the process.
So I think that's why the critic critiques.
Perhaps it is because you are operating int realm of a critic who offers his critique of others writing, etc. ... Such would then render you a Literary Crtic, which is the correct term, though I have no concept of why the English language has, thus far, declined to accept critiquer as a viable word ... Interesting concept ...
I am an aspiring author whom was on penwrights for ...well ... about as long as it existed... I watched apathetically as the site fell to pieces... Freedom of expression was squashed... People were be.. more..