Falling Into The Rabbit Hole

Alice in the Wonderland... Can I Join You? I want my own peace... my own insane asylum...

I was down

Never up

I was falling

Like Alice into Wonderland

The White Rabbit is running late

I'm running out of time

Cheshire the Cat is always smiling mischievously

And I am always frowning, sorrowfully

The Queen of Hearts is scowling at everyone

And I am looking down on the world

Absolem the Caterpillar wants to give advice

But I refuse like a vice is holding me

The Mad Hatter is crazy

I am insane

I'm slowly falling into my own insane asylum

Never going up

Always going down

Never seeing light

Only the sight 

Of darkness

Coating my room

Dark corners

No one in sight

Gripping me like a vice

Refusing to let me go

Refusing to see me through

I am stuck

I can't breath

I'm falling

Down

Down

Down

Into the rabbit hole

Author's Note

What do y'all think!? Please leave me anything in the reviews! Love Y'all!!! <3

Reviews

[Beautiful Intentions]

I adored the structure of this, the color variations, receding and ascending lettering, making this piece entirely eye popping and hard hitting in certain places. There was something about this that felt as if it had held it's breath the entire time and finally released it with the last line. Like one mighty exhale beyond the page... Am a massive fan of anything Alice in Wonderland, so I thoroughly enjoyed the character mentions, the imagery used, feeling as if I was spinning further and further down the rabbit hole word by word. Caught up in a sense of being horror-stricken, as if desperately clawing into the earth to keep from falling, and yet, still slipping away. Wonderfully done, Starr! Made my heart race!

[Starr]

Wow! I love this review! This so much inspired me to write another poem on a Disney movie! I am amazed and astonished that all of this came from my poetry! Thank you so much and I still phased by this! I am love this so much!! Thank you so much!!

[Beautiful Intentions]

You are most welcome, Starr.:) Only giving credit where credit is due. And completely anticipating your next Disney write!

[Starr]

Thankss! And thanks again and I will have it up soon!

[highwalls]

this is great work, I'm not a big fan of Alice in Wonderland but the comparison you made here is very very fascinating. Keep it up.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I love Alice personally. And thanks so much, I tried to accomplish that

[andrew mitchell]

A refreshing entertaining story. Well done!

[Starr]

Thanks so much! Read more of my fantasy and amazing (to me at least) writing!

[andrew mitchell]

i wish there was such a place to go on holidays lol. escape the riff raff!!

[Starr]

oh yes same here. I would love it

[iamshadowine]

This is really, really good! i loved it! and your style of writing made it even more interesting to read!!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I really am glad you like (love) it! I will always keep writing!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

That was a fun read lol. Despite the fact, it's about always falling, though I suppose, to keep falling you must have gotten back up, which would make this an encouraging read! Tyfs!

[Starr]

Thanks so much! And yes that is the truth on this one!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very enjoyable read. You made the old tale have more life and energy. Thank you Starr for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I love Alice and so I went and said BAM! I will twist up the story into my life. Thanks so much for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this tale and you are welcome.

[p]

Personally I've never cared for Alice in Wonderland, but I would say that this fits my estimate of what going through a panic or anxiety attack is like, and if you just ignore me calling your writing a panic attack, then there's a genuine compliment in here somewhere!

Not bad at all!

[Starr]

Thanks so much and I have no clue what got me on the subject lol. Thanks for reading!!

[Tessah]

It sounds like what I have been going through, now I've got something to light up the shadows and chase them away.

[Starr]

Yea, this is totally me right now. I thank you so much for this! I hope you stay level lol