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A Poem by Starr
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Always believe in what isn't there.... sometimes pain is worth it... sometimes you have to drop it and move on, let the world in...breathe...

© 2016 Starr


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Starr
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I agree. Great logic in your words. Thank you Starr for sharing your excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starr

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I LOVE IT!
keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starr

8 Years Ago

Thanks and I will never stop writing. It is my life!
Life is about those moments when one just needs to breathe...
Simple and true statement.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starr

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
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A simple statement of truth, one I share with you, and the "sometimes" adds more room for the reader to relate- makes this part gentle. Did you mean "breathe" at the end, or "breath"? It would make a difference to me which one . . .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starr

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! This means the world to me yet again... and I meant "breathe" I forgot to change it... read more

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