Smile...No

Hey smile...or not

I wear a Clown Smile, no emotion behind it, painted on to fool the worlds eye..

Author's Note

Here ya go, another writing for Y'all <3

Reviews

[Timothy Ryan]

A message a lot of people can relate to. I forget the writing style name where you try to get as big a message in as little wording as possible. Whatever it is, you did a good job with this one. If you wanted to, there's definitely room to expand and give stanzas as examples. It also also works just fine as is. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us all.

[Starr]

Thank you so much! I love my readers and reviews! As I always say, multiple times, THANKS SO MUCH I REALLY APPRECIATE THIS!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and honest thoughts in your poetry. It is sad we rarely show true face. Thank you Starr for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

Thanks again! I love your reviews! And I am always writing and never to quit!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome.

[Starr]

I could never quit writing

[Marianne Rose]

Yes, the masks we wear, to hide what we feel . . . Or don't feel. Very good concise poem.

[Starr]

Thanks so Much! I appreciate this so much!

[iamshadowine]

wow! amazing sense of writing i must say!
loved it!
great work!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[p]

I too wear a clown's smile, and I too have nothing behind it... but I think yours is less literal than mine, Very nice poem!

[Starr]

Thanks so much!