Soul

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The key to your soul is bought with love... not money nor hatred.

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

I like the concept and message. I just wonder about the word "bought" which seems so materially related. I see the key to my soul as forged, made, created with love, rather than bought, as if it belonged to someone else and then love came and bought it. Just my intuitive reaction. But the message- it is love not hate or money that opens the door of my soul- is one I resonate with well. Thank you.

[Starr]

Thanks so much for reading. Most of my writes are write quickly and no finalized so most are drafts and I rewrite as I go

[Irenic]

The. Lines are epic. They have taken my heart.
Keep writing.
Thanks for sharing it with all of us. :)

[Starr]

THANKS! SO muchh! I am so glad you love it. I can't believe it speaks to you this way! Thanks again!

[Irenic]

Welcome .........................:)

[Chrys Marie]

This is so true, all parts of it. Sad to say that many people still use other ways as a key to someone's soul, instead of love. Nice work.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate this!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Without knowing love. What are we? Thank you Starr for sharing the excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[Starr]

Always and thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Starr.

[p]

When it comes to fiction (and I do mean just fiction, I'm not a sociopath.) I've always found that someone's soul is exposed at their lowest point... Well that's enough philosophy. I loved your poem.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I appreciate your reviews!