Love Me the Way I Love You...

Please.. forgive me and Love me

I wish you could love me

Love me the way I love you

I wish you could see me

The way I see you

I wish you could breath my air

So that you could feel the way I do

Can you love me?

Love me the way I love you

Can you see me?

See me the way I see you

Can you hold me tonight?

Hold me the way I want to hold you

Can you forgive me?

Like the way I forgive you

Can you kiss me?

The way I want to kiss you

Can you hold me tonight

All night long

Never let me go

Never say goodbye

Always holding me

And I will always hold you

Till' the dawn wakes us up

Or the night puts us down

Arrow to the heart 

Knife to the chest

 Breath that I breathe

Soul that keeps burning

World that keeps spinning around

Hold me to your chest

And I will hold you

Forgive me if will

Take me if you will

Lock me away if you must

I would trade my soul with the devil

If you couldn't hold me tonight

I will do anything

Anything

I will hold you

If you will let me through

I need you

Will you hold me?

Will you love me?

Or is this a fantasy 

Or is this a fantasy come true

Hold me tonight

Never let me go

Never say goodbye

Because I love you

More than a lily loves water

More than a bee loves his honey

More than the moon loves the dark

More than the sun loves the day

More than anything

In every single way

I don't want to lose the one I love Forever...

Love me the way I love you...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

This does read like a song, I think it would be a good one . . . Really loved and related to the longing and the desire to be met in every encounter with the same devotion offered. So often love is unequal. My grandmother once told me never love someone more than they love you. Of course, I ignored her. So I can relate.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! My Nemo and I are so close and this was something that I just had to write and she means the world to me!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use or words and thoughts.
"Love me the way I love you..."
The above lines are the wish of the most of us. I liked the story and the hope in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

No problem and Thanks as Always

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Quinn W]

I really loved this! It's so cute! I love the wording so much! Probably my favorite of yours. I feel like this could be a song! It was so beautiful!

[Starr]

Thank you so much! And when I wrote this, I actually was singing it!

[iamshadowine]

wow! this is so pretty!!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[zunie frost]

i really love it !!!
the flow just kept me reading !!
lovely piece
keep it up

[Starr]

Once again, I appreciate you reading my writing!

[zunie frost]

my pleasure

[p]

That was beautiful.I'm certain nemo will love it

[Starr]

I hope she will... Thanks!