Bleak

Will you try?

The bleakness of the night is none more than the bleakness of your soul, unless you try...

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

I like it- shows how our perspective- if connected with our soul- can see the night differently. But I want to know . . . Try what? Feels like there's a little more to say . . . I agree though with the message. Thanks for sharing this.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! The questions within this are for the readers to answer themselves

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Hard to stay clean. You said a lot in the short poetry. Thank you Starr for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[iamshadowine]

wow! this is so deep! i love it! i've always loved the way you can convey your message in just a few lines!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Wow! Thanks you so much! I love short lines because the idea of the whole things is so deep. And thanks you again!