Dark Betryal

Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It severs me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the broken ground.
In my madness I call your name
while Death's shadow looms.
Now alone, my blood falls upon darkened eyes.

This is because of you

Author's Note

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