Georgia

A poem about a person I hold very dear in my heart.

The love of my life.

O " how do I miss you.

And your round inquisitive blue eyes.

And the gold frame of locks around your porcelain face.

Hundreds of miles separate us.

But our conversation brings me to your side.

When we questioned the cosmos,

And contemplated unearthly realms.

Life was eroding,
I took steps in the wrong direction.

Perhaps if I stayed, you would have fixed me.

Our time together was short.

But our story is never-ending.

My heart yearns for you, O' Georgia.

And the art on your skin.

And the geography of your body.

My mind goes to a time where we reunite.

And a time where I never leave.

Could they be the same?

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

This has the frame of a nice rhyme scheme.

You should edit this with the phrase "word economy" in mind.

It does kinda sound like I dislike it but that's only partially true. Usually I just say nothing. I kinda liked this (if it was more efficiently worded).

[Taino]

Beautifully written. You can feel and visualize the special connection you both had and how important she is to you.

[E.J. Michalec]

Gorgeous imagery. Very very well written.

[poetgurl]

a longing in this write, I feel this write. Wonderfully expressed

[Wolf Towne]

Thank you so much!