The Blue Moon

The moon isn't white anymore,

it's blue, it got it's blue color from the sad memories,

the sad memories of the human world,

the moon was white because of the humans pure souls,

but now it's blue because all humans isn't pure anymore.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed this little poem :)

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

This is a good example of brevity in poetry being able to make a profound statement. The only quibble would be the last line where the tense is wrong. 'because all humans isn't pure anymore ' because of the plurality of humans, it should read 'because all humans aren't pure anymore'. A good write nonetheless.

[Rainy]

Thank you for correcting me, I really appreciate that. I'm still learning the English language so I'm thankful, thank you!

[NucleusOfARose]

You've written a very beautiful and sad poem, and I absolutely love it. Thanks for sharing!

[Rainy]

No problem and I'm glad you liked it!!

[ManasaC]

stark truth of the world now. Very nice poem.

[Rainy]

Thank you!!

[Pink Pastel]

Very good love it♡--------♡

[Rainy]

Thank you very much!! xD

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome^~^

[Jacob]

Huh, short, sweet and to the point. I like it, though it's a little somber for my taste.

[Rainy]

awww but I'm glad you like it! :)

[horizon]

nice comparison of purity of souls from the brightness of moon..as when we are true and pure we come out and shine..words reflect your thought..

[Rainy]

yeah and thx!! :D

[B.J]

Life of humans and how we change. Well written inspiration all

[Rainy]

Thank you!! :D

[B.J]

You are welcome

[Karmee]

Tripling amazing words here,
Truthful too, I'm beginning to think.
Very nicely presented.

[Rainy]

Thank youuuuuu!!

[XVCrow]

Very neat perception of humans and the fall of us. I like the tie in with the moon. Thanks for sharing.

[Rainy]

Thank you!! and no problem :D

[Asante]

This was a nice little way to add personality to something as foreign as the moon. :)
Keep up the work, and absolutely keep writing!

[Rainy]

thank you very much! :)

[Asante]

You're welcome. :)