Nothingness Land

What if time itself came to a stop?
No more wonders to see, no more dreams to live.

Nothing.
Just a mere puddle of nothingness.
Lost in the void of space and time.

So there will be no more smiles,
no more goodbyes
no sighs
no lies,
just a mere puddle of nothing as time slips away
and yet I'm here floating
on nothing
over the moon of your everything
as I keep drifting far away...
Into nothingness land.

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Interesting thesis. I know they say 'time stopped for me' but I think that's different. Time is an interesting concept and ranges from our personal perception to the scientific definition. Well done for your take on this.
Cheers.
alan
Just remembered i have a story called 'times arrow' you might like.