Emerald Eyes

I feel like it has been a while
since I thought of you.

Of your beautiful green deep eyes
Of your pale like porcelain skin
So much like mine, so much like me
So completely me.

They say there can only be one
of us in the world
and yet, a copy of you was born.
Was that decided by god?
To have two of you
Perfection can only be true.

No builder could create
more grandiose palace
No king could make his
a greater castle.

One pair of emerald eyes
and the dream fades away
since to let your smile shine
the beast I couldn't slay.

I break.
I failed.
I ache.
I failed.

Now, as I see how time flies
With sadness I realize,
I had never truly forgotten,
Those deep emerald eyes.

Reviews

[Cassidy14]

This poem is well-written and so descriptive. very beautiful. You should be very proud.

[Tiny Drop]

Thank you so much for your kind words Cassidy! With a review like yours how could I not!? Thank you so, so very much ^^

[jaywolf1738]

A very deep and touching piece of work. It kept me hypnotized about those emerald eyes. Good job :-)

[Tiny Drop]

Thank you so much for your words Jaywolf ^^ this is one of my most dear poems I'm truly glad you enjoyed it!