Steal the Rain

My class said it was Pink Floyd-esque and even checked for plagarism. I won. Ha! Mine...

Steal the rain

And storm the sun

All that's known

Will come undone.

 

In this time

Of now or never

Come with us

And stay forever.

Author's Note

Is ok?

Reviews

[Shellie]

its actually very good, but the ending lost me....'come with us' what do you mean? id hate it to be changed but it just lost its power with that last part.