The one that saved me

A poem about my boyfriend

Beyond time, I've waited for thee

In my cube of moving thoughts

They went bugged eyed when you were hung on my wall

When they saw how creative you were

How loyal, and amazing as well

For you, I'll give my last breath

For you, I'll give you my soul

None of the others could reach the goals you have placed

Every kiss is like the sun

Every embrace is like silk

Long life of hades I've endured

With the others

Sinking myself lower and lower

Until I saw your face

At that moment I knew you were the one

Reviews

[BlackRose]

LOVE fills this poem so well. Passion seeps through and through. I adored it.

[Jonathan Torres]

Aww thank you for that :)

[BlackRose]

Your very welcome. :o)

[Emily Feret]

wow, what passion filled poem. You can really feel the love being expressed here

[Jonathan Torres]

:) merci'