Nature's Wrath

A poem for the QWERTY challenge.

 

Quickening winds

 

Endless rain

 

 

Thunderous yells

 

unleashed in obvious pain.

 

 

Anger seething

 

Darting, flashing

 

 

Gleaming, heaving jolts keep lashing.

 

 

Zigzagging, xanthic clashes

 

 

Violently brandish

 

Nature's madness.

Author's Note

And yes, xanthic is a real word. It means 'bright yellow' :)

Reviews

[December Blaize]

This poem is absolutely amazing! QWERTY is a challenging format, but none of your words sound at all forced. The poem flows nicely and does a great job of personifying the storm, nature's wrath. You know you're a great writer when you can take a challenge like this and create something brilliant and beautiful. That's why this piece is the Best QWERTY Winner for my QWERTY Challenge! I love this, it's going on my Favorites shelf, definitely.

[emipoemi]

The symphony of thunderstorms written coherently in verse and rhyme for all to read and understand! Well done! Much enjoyed!

[Tobias H. Reese]

Congratulations!
Your poem Nature's Wrath has been awarded "I can actually write" in the "So many Morons, so little time" writing contest.
:-)

I'll need proper information on how to credit you in a "Video-as-Art" piece.
Example, On screen:

a film by Tobias H. Reese
based on a poem by " YOUR NAME"
photography Samuel Beam
Voice actor Sherman Koltz (?)tbd
etc.....

Also, if you have a Youtube link, instagram account etc. please provide user names and preferred links to your work or a way for others to contact you. Otherwise I'll at least include this writerscafe account as a link to your art.

It will be produced once I sketch out the creative direction for it; secure the other artists' contributions, score for it etc. It will be shared on Instagram (my user name is "Reese_customsandart", Youtube (my channels as well as an artist collective "CVP" channel, the other contributing artist' channels etc. if they so choose to)

Also, for certain works I like to enter them in videoediting contests here and there. You will always be notified.

Production times vary from project to project; I'll keep you posted on creative interpretations and scripts I come up with. My guess - considering the many projects I have ongoing- is 1 - 5 weeks.
Thank you.

[Coffee Vampier]

Oh I love storms! Its so completely wonderful! I can see the sky having a fight with itself and the rain filled with emotion, Its dark and gloomy but beautiful and insane all at the same time. Very beautiful.

[Legolas]

Very nice:) I love the rhyming:) keep it up:)

[Ama May Cooper]

I love your vocabulary and the way you weild it such bright and different words , creative and intellegent piece.
I love the way the description seems to grow like the leaves its wonderful , a brilliant and fantastic write.

[Chloe]

Simple but amazing. Keep it up

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Totally love this. Fantastic job done with this challenge!

[Aehr]

1 word = MARVELOUS!!!

[Distant horizons]

Excellent