Why?

Why?

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀
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Why is there so much sadness, so much hate..?

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Why is there so much sadness

So much stress and hateful blather?

Why do people get so angry

Over things that do not matter?


The sun is bright and shining.

You get to live another day!

So what if something unimportant

Doesn't go your way?


Forget about these useless things!

If you don't wake up and see,

You'll never get to live your life

The way you're supposed to be.


So save your worrying and stress

For the worthy situations.   

Appreciate each moment you have

And live life without hesitation.





© 2012 ❀ Gabriela ❀


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Excellent advice here written in a lovely poetic form.
Such a delightful little poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know. this truth only came to me a few week ago.

whenever i get to low or sink to a certain descent, I always with a calm reverence, reassure and tell myself "wasting life tribulations and woes with cumbreds of little importance of not wanting a cross to bear or living without a penny stresss us to worry is wasting sorrows God sent to us to strenghten us with heavenly virtues and a walk with Him in no hurry."

Posted 12 Years Ago


Impressive!

Posted 12 Years Ago


its bright and a poem that really cheers you up!!! Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very impressive writing and message in this poem. There doesn't seem to be an answer to your question, sadly enough. A fabulous poem for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is amazing I'm sure to look at your other work I was going to say a couple ways to give the poem better rhythum but now looking back it's probably better the way it is, makes you have to look back and think more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Once again I am impressed with your positive outlook, I wish sometimes, I had more faith in myself to "live life without hesitation." Words to reflect on.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true! It is very well written. It is so plain, and yet so...beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 13, 2012
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Tags: Why, Sadness, Stress, Live, Life, Love, Inspire

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 ❀ Gabriela ❀
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