Taking Chances

Have you yet dared to dream?

Have you eyed the sky

Or spared barely a glance?


Have you reached for the stars,

Have you taken a chance?


Have you looked towards the sun?

Have you reached for the sky?


Or do you lie, watching clouds

As life passes you by?


Have you ever wondered:

Is life all it seems?


Don't you want to be more?

Haven't you dared to dream?


Have you taken a chance?

Don't you want to go far?


Reach out to the sky

Because you might catch a star.

Reviews

[Wretched Knight]

Hi Gabriela. Love the eye. Love the poem. I can relate.

[TyarraRaine]

amaaazzingggg !![: i can barely ryhme !! lol awesome job:D

[Marie]

This is exceptionally good. The kindof rhyming scheme I like. And it says so much about hope and aspiration.

[Tessa.]

I love it, definently something everyone needs to not just hear but listen.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words carry us into the richness of the sky to soar and fly... to let dreams become waking moments of splendor... So wondrous...

[LunarSong]

this reminds me of a quote though, "Aim for the moon. If you miss you may hit a star." One of my science teachers used to have that on his wall.

[Nautili]

Very inspiring, it really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing. Sometimes we just need a nudge to pursue our dreams in spite of inner fears that try to talk us out of it.

[khalid]

that is really very nice poem. i love it

[Tina Kline]

This is a wonderful poem and very very impressive! I love the positive message in this very well written poem. This is splendid writing!

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is so pure and hopeful...I love the optimism and cadence of this!