To The Point

To The Point

A Story by Wintershade
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My submission for a contest.

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Reflected in the bloody, knife were eyes that weren't hers.  She screamed.

© 2015 Wintershade


Author's Note

Wintershade
The criterion is for it to be 12 words, only.

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So much told, in a singular sentence, I am very impressed!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago
Very chilling, a haunting image that will be there when I shut my eyes tonight

Posted 9 Years Ago
Wow. Very frightening! I would only suggest you remove the comma, because for me it broke up the sentence and took some of the flow and drama away. If this was intentional, then I just may be reading it incorrectly. Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very chilling, I love it
By the way, I grew up in Boston

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wintershade

9 Years Ago

Thanks. This was very challenging...just 12 words. Wow.

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 Added on September 11, 2015
Last Updated on September 11, 2015
Tags: horror, contest, challenge

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Wintershade
Wintershade

Dalton, MA



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I've been writing since I was a little kid. I enjoy writing in all kinds of formats; poetry, short stories, reviews, articles, fiction - anything. I am a newly ignited Blogger and YouTube member. .. more..

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