All Fall Down
A Book by Al
 Marianne is a 16 year old girl in Maine who keeps control of her life. But there has always been one person who could throw her life off course. Her ex boyfriend, Hayden. On one warm evening in the park Mary and Hayden are thrown into a completely differ  © 2008 Al
Author's Note
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Gah! xD This isn't my best work, but it's the only one I want to post to the public. Please read it and disregard if the name "Aidan" pops up, it's indicating to "Hayden". I always edit my names. I am a very young writer and I want all the criticism and advice I can get. So please, fill er up! ;D All I ask it tell me exactly what you feel about this story so far.
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Added on August 6, 2008
Last Updated on August 6, 2008
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Hey duder. I'm Al. A few things about me. I have a hat named Remus. I have a Vincent FF7 plushie. I broke my glasses so I could copy off of my friend. I suck balls at first impressions. So I don't eve.. more..
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