He has caught my eye

He has caught my eye...

The boy with the sun kissed skin

With dark hair and brown eyes

His lips so soft and tender

I want them pressed to mine

He has caught my eye....

The boy with the saintly smile

A twinkle shines through his eyes

His hands and grip are strong

Yet, they are gentle when he holds mine

He has caught my eye...

The boy who uses his clever wit

Wooing me with his words of honey

Secret messages of love through riddles

And I know they are meant for me

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the journey in the poetry.
"Wooing me with his words of honey
Secret messages of love through riddles
And I know they are meant for me"
Good to be treated as special and wanted. I liked the above words. Great description create visions and a possibility of a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[genocide]

this means he's attacted with you and is going to try to be with you

[Unknown Known]

The poem makes sense and is easy to follow

[Unknown Known]

I knew it'd be a great novel.

[FlatLineBeauty]

This is a poem not a novel silly

[Unknown Known]

I corrected meself. And don't call it out. I look like an idiot already.

[ron]

This is so romantic and sweet, a beautiful poem.

[MrsKittyKat]

This is a Beautiful Poem! I like how the poem flows from stanza to stanza! There is much feeling in this poem and as I read I can see this man and feel the feeling towards him. This poem is moving and very well done! I quite enjoyed it! I really Love Poetry with Love themes in them. Just a very good poem throughout!

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you Kat. I wrote this in a matter of minutes without really trying too much. xo Karma

[RomaJ]

I am in love with this poem. It has caught my eye. I love the vivid details, wonderfully written.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you, Roma! I'm happy it caught your eye. When I wrote it, it was one of those on the fly things and I didn't think it would be that good, but I thought it was decent enough to post ^^ xo Karma

[KeeD]

I love how you describe him, like he's something beautiful. He would never see himself in that light, but you somehow make him feel like he's worth something. I love this poem, its just so amazing I wish I had a girl write these for me, I'd never want to do anything but wake up to her smile and reflect on her sweet words no matter how difficult the day. Every word of this poem makes me smile. For if each word of this piece was compared to making me smile and if each word were a star, this poem is a galaxy and i'll smile for eternity.

[FlatLineBeauty]

That's so sweet Kee. Thank you! -big hugs- I'm happy it made you smile ^^ xo Karma

[KeeD]

Lets talk soon, miss you terribly

[FlatLineBeauty]

You know this was about you right? haha xD I was reading back through all my writing and I was like I wonder if he ever knew xD

[KeeD]

Didn't have a clue, i'm flattered. I mean my review said I wish I had someone write something so beautiful for me.Without your beautiful soul reflecting how I can be seen as beautiful, i'd go on living life never knowing that i'm worth something. This poem at that time made me want to be worth someones something, today I learned that I was and am worth it.

[FlatLineBeauty]

You are even that behind the screen was written for you back then